OH WOW! More amazing feedback - you're going to spoil me completely to death, you know! Trust me, late is not a problem. :) Thanks so much for taking the time to comment.
I'm so glad you enjoyed this one. I was a little worried that I'd stretched the metaphor a bit too far. But it was fun having Quatre consciously crafting the metaphor himself, instead of having the all-powerful narrator do it for him. It made it more malleable and interactive. (Not that that was what I intended from the beginning - but that's one of my favorite things about doing these quick, short fics - you can learn so much from them!) Also glad you appreciated the maturity - it's tough being a thirtysomething anime fan - everyone's so young and hopeful and energetic!
I am honored to have you friend me!! (And hope you don't mind if I return the favor.) Yippee!! Another friend! I think that makes three - can you tell they don't let me out much? ; )
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I'm so glad you enjoyed this one. I was a little worried that I'd stretched the metaphor a bit too far. But it was fun having Quatre consciously crafting the metaphor himself, instead of having the all-powerful narrator do it for him. It made it more malleable and interactive. (Not that that was what I intended from the beginning - but that's one of my favorite things about doing these quick, short fics - you can learn so much from them!) Also glad you appreciated the maturity - it's tough being a thirtysomething anime fan - everyone's so young and hopeful and energetic!
I am honored to have you friend me!! (And hope you don't mind if I return the favor.) Yippee!! Another friend! I think that makes three - can you tell they don't let me out much? ; )